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>DING< A Light Bulb

Post  Musei Namida on Fri Apr 11, 2008 7:56 am

Hello there alliance. I invite everyone to read something I did a long time ago. I wrote this story about 8 years ago and I haven't done much to it since.

http://www.geocities.com/guildmot/index.html

Here's the thing. I'm still writing a few things for college and I'm writing a couple things for friends and this forum. My mind is still racing and I need something else to do to take my mind off of school.

Here's the idea, I want to know if I should fix my younger years gramer mistakes and finish the story. I am willing to put three names in the story based of your in game charecters.

Names will be figured out after poll.

To Be Continued...
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Post  Abby on Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:50 pm

I'm not gonna lie and say it's a good story...... Cause i think it's a WOW story!!
You see, I don't read that often Rolling Eyes because I get bored too easilly Sad , but when a story makes me wanna read it....well then it's a nice story Very Happy

Nice twist Smile
Father killed mother thing, lol

Ohhlala, he got girlfriend Very Happy
"...,driving his imagination to the brink of madness with the desire to kiss the perfect design of her luscious lips." nice Smile

There are bullies, lol
ooo, and he's learning from being beaten up Suspect

ooo, he strong at puberty Very Happy

", or so he thought… " oooo nice Smile

WOW!!
Only read the prologue thou, but it sounds reeaaal nice Very Happy

And YES YES fix it Smile

I will read more as time flows by Smile
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Post  Musei Namida on Sun Apr 13, 2008 4:25 am

Thank you Indis, if you like some of those parts from the prologue you should read the rest. alot happens in only 4 chapters.
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